Oops on 4Players! With the screenshot, I'm good with it- the caption should be fixed as the grammar isn't great there (the first sentence isn't a sentence, so shouldn't have a period- I'd say something like "Thalya stands in front of a dungeon entrance." I'm good with the second sentence. Regards So Why 19:24, 5 July 2018 (UTC) Sorry for the delay here! Been traveling for work. See also Talk:SpellForce 3 which you also reviewed btw Regards So Why 07:45, 5 July 2018 (UTC) Added a screenshot, hopefully it fits. #Dungeons 3 pc game cover art PcIt's owned and run by the same company that also publishes PC Games and other German gaming magazines, so I assume it's reliable. As for the question about 4Players, see its article. Regards So Why 07:19, 5 July 2018 (UTC) Okay, I made most of the changes, mostly by rewriting more than just a word. I'll try again in the evening, maybe I can find some better scenes to screenshot. As for screenshot, I was trying to create a good screenshot yesterday but unfortunately, the game's graphics make it pretty hard to create a screenshot where you can distinguish anything at the low resolution NFCC demands, rendering them useless for illustration purposes. Nomader ( talk) 03:03, 5 July 2018 (UTC) Nomader: Thanks for the review so far, I'll get on the 1a stuff asap. I think it'd be worth it to add a screenshot for illustration purposes here, but otherwise my comments above are it. Nomader ( talk) 02:49, 5 July 2018 (UTC) This is really a well-done article, haven't found many grammar issues at all and the sources for the most part all seem solid to me. I think that's perfectly fine, I'll be adding a ton of comments this evening and will hopefully complete the first pass tonight (had to go celebrate July 4th over here in the States). Regards So Why 20:11, 4 July 2018 (UTC) I saw it was your article and I couldn't help myself! Figured it'd be fun to do round two. Also, I made some more changes while I was at it. I hope you don't mind me adding ticks for comments I have addressed. I just added this line to separate my response from your comments.
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